Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Things beyond yes or no

Yes, not much to cheer
in this month,dear
but don’t you remember?
its our own December!

You may reason
‘it was another season,
and love is pain
more loss than gain’

It is true, many promises still remain
but believe that all are not in vain
though nowadays ,I may not
wake you and quote
‘In each drop of dew
I see you’
as love,like a single child
is wild
cannot be tamed
nor be named

love,life and rain
joy,hope and pain
are they real?
or daydreams unreal?

this season we will know
things beyond yes or no

30 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

Oh a love song from MIP...and as realistic and down to earth :)

but YES, I really enjoyed this one, MIP :)

wishes,
devika

sheeza said...

wow wonderfull

i love the lines

"because love,like a single child
is wild
cannot be tamed"

wonderful again.

aayanman said...

simplicity conveying a deep message is difficult task. you ve done it wonderfully.

amateur writer said...

Hmm this season wll b entirely different for you....

Anonymous said...

this is beautiful and profound at the same time.

Regards,
A.J.Johnson
Writing and Art

Salil said...

We will wait many more Decembers to get to the bottom of this.

Reminds me of a Woody Allen quote:
"To love is to suffer. To avoid suffering one must not love. But then one suffers from not loving. Therefore to love is to suffer, not to love is to suffer. To suffer is to suffer. To be happy is to love. To be happy then is to suffer because to love is to suffer. But suffering makes one unhappy. Therefore, to be unhappy one must love, or love to suffer, or suffer from too much happiness. I hope you're getting this down."

Cheers,
Salil

aria said...

"this season we will know
things beyond yes or no"

lovely.
there is something about this season, isn't it ..? love is certainly in the air .
quite different from from your usual stuff as you said..
sorry for being late here.. had been tied up ..
plz write more :)

Iniyaal said...

Lovely lines... I dont now why, but when I read your lines, not one but many meanings dawm on me.

Anju said...

nice one.
cheers!

joie de vivre said...

go go go beyond everything :)

tunafish said...

This makes me visualise you sitting with your sweetheart in a mellow age, mellow evening watching a mellow sunset... I am allowed to sigh? :)

Anonymous said...

Happy Holidays and my wish for you in the coming year is that it will be overflowing with new and wonderful accomplishments.

Best Regards,
A.J.

Kush said...

Things beyond...o well!

Rakesh Vanamali said...

I can imagine how it must be, away from loved ones! I've been away from fellow bloggers and their blogs for a long time now and truly missed it. Hope you are doing good. Wishing you and folks a merry Christmas and a very happy new year!

Karthika said...

Great MIP!Keep going.......

Roopa said...

I am going to break my self-imposed silence here. The poem is simply beautiful MIP. You are still battling with reality and fantasy...aren't we all?

Devika Jyothi said...

Wish you and family and A very Happy New Year, MIP :)

wishes,
devika

Fantasies of a Lifetime said...

'In each drop of dew
I see you’
as love,like a single child
is wild
cannot be tamed
nor be named'

u write awesome love poems MIP . . Loved it . . .

manoranjini said...

Awwwwwwwww... loved it !!!!

Jyoti said...

cute it was!

Diwakar Sinha said...

very beautifullly written indeed...very involving and meaningful.

AshenGlow said...

love,life and rain
joy, hope and pain
are they real?


God how much i wish i knew the answer to that...

This was a refreshingly frank poetry. Its not only about expressing love. Its about feeling it.. Or is it? The 'untamed child' at times gets really tricky to handle! :)

Am here after a really long time and sorrrie for that. Have been caught up with the so called rains and pains of life...

Anyway you keep up your fantastic writing!

Cheers,
Ashen

The Wandering Gypsy said...

This was beautiful :)

Mampi said...

I sooo identify with this one.

Where are you lost???

rainboy said...

//this season we will know
things beyond yes or no//

they hit something inside.
Very well written...

Love can't be tamed nor the heart.

take care

Arthur Dent said...

A relationship maturing, and with it, the expectations attached also undergoing a metamorphosis... NICE! :D

manoranjini said...

This fan awaits more poetry here ...

Ankur said...

oh.. i loved it.. so poetic and lyrical .. and subtle and powerful at the same time..

Devika Jyothi said...

MIP, Its been a real long long time...why aren't you writing?

hope all is well with you and family,

wishes,
devika

The Idle Brain said...

absolutely loved it! How beautiful!