Yes, not much to cheer
in this month,dear
but don’t you remember?
its our own December!
You may reason
‘it was another season,
and love is pain
more loss than gain’
It is true, many promises still remain
but believe that all are not in vain
though nowadays ,I may not
wake you and quote
‘In each drop of dew
I see you’
as love,like a single child
is wild
cannot be tamed
nor be named
love,life and rain
joy,hope and pain
are they real?
or daydreams unreal?
this season we will know
things beyond yes or no
30 comments:
Oh a love song from MIP...and as realistic and down to earth :)
but YES, I really enjoyed this one, MIP :)
wishes,
devika
wow wonderfull
i love the lines
"because love,like a single child
is wild
cannot be tamed"
wonderful again.
simplicity conveying a deep message is difficult task. you ve done it wonderfully.
Hmm this season wll b entirely different for you....
this is beautiful and profound at the same time.
Regards,
A.J.Johnson
Writing and Art
We will wait many more Decembers to get to the bottom of this.
Reminds me of a Woody Allen quote:
"To love is to suffer. To avoid suffering one must not love. But then one suffers from not loving. Therefore to love is to suffer, not to love is to suffer. To suffer is to suffer. To be happy is to love. To be happy then is to suffer because to love is to suffer. But suffering makes one unhappy. Therefore, to be unhappy one must love, or love to suffer, or suffer from too much happiness. I hope you're getting this down."
Cheers,
Salil
"this season we will know
things beyond yes or no"
lovely.
there is something about this season, isn't it ..? love is certainly in the air .
quite different from from your usual stuff as you said..
sorry for being late here.. had been tied up ..
plz write more :)
Lovely lines... I dont now why, but when I read your lines, not one but many meanings dawm on me.
nice one.
cheers!
go go go beyond everything :)
This makes me visualise you sitting with your sweetheart in a mellow age, mellow evening watching a mellow sunset... I am allowed to sigh? :)
Happy Holidays and my wish for you in the coming year is that it will be overflowing with new and wonderful accomplishments.
Best Regards,
A.J.
Things beyond...o well!
I can imagine how it must be, away from loved ones! I've been away from fellow bloggers and their blogs for a long time now and truly missed it. Hope you are doing good. Wishing you and folks a merry Christmas and a very happy new year!
Great MIP!Keep going.......
I am going to break my self-imposed silence here. The poem is simply beautiful MIP. You are still battling with reality and fantasy...aren't we all?
Wish you and family and A very Happy New Year, MIP :)
wishes,
devika
'In each drop of dew
I see you’
as love,like a single child
is wild
cannot be tamed
nor be named'
u write awesome love poems MIP . . Loved it . . .
Awwwwwwwww... loved it !!!!
cute it was!
very beautifullly written indeed...very involving and meaningful.
love,life and rain
joy, hope and pain
are they real?
God how much i wish i knew the answer to that...
This was a refreshingly frank poetry. Its not only about expressing love. Its about feeling it.. Or is it? The 'untamed child' at times gets really tricky to handle! :)
Am here after a really long time and sorrrie for that. Have been caught up with the so called rains and pains of life...
Anyway you keep up your fantastic writing!
Cheers,
Ashen
This was beautiful :)
I sooo identify with this one.
Where are you lost???
//this season we will know
things beyond yes or no//
they hit something inside.
Very well written...
Love can't be tamed nor the heart.
take care
A relationship maturing, and with it, the expectations attached also undergoing a metamorphosis... NICE! :D
This fan awaits more poetry here ...
oh.. i loved it.. so poetic and lyrical .. and subtle and powerful at the same time..
MIP, Its been a real long long time...why aren't you writing?
hope all is well with you and family,
wishes,
devika
absolutely loved it! How beautiful!
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