Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Things beyond yes or no

Yes, not much to cheer
in this month,dear
but don’t you remember?
its our own December!

You may reason
‘it was another season,
and love is pain
more loss than gain’

It is true, many promises still remain
but believe that all are not in vain
though nowadays ,I may not
wake you and quote
‘In each drop of dew
I see you’
as love,like a single child
is wild
cannot be tamed
nor be named

love,life and rain
joy,hope and pain
are they real?
or daydreams unreal?

this season we will know
things beyond yes or no

52 comments:

Devika said...

Oh a love song from MIP...and as realistic and down to earth :)

but YES, I really enjoyed this one, MIP :)

wishes,
devika

sheeza said...

wow wonderfull

i love the lines

"because love,like a single child
is wild
cannot be tamed"

wonderful again.

Gyanban said...

simplicity conveying a deep message is difficult task. you ve done it wonderfully.

amateur writer said...

Hmm this season wll b entirely different for you....

A.J.Johnson said...

this is beautiful and profound at the same time.

Regards,
A.J.Johnson
Writing and Art

Salil said...

We will wait many more Decembers to get to the bottom of this.

Reminds me of a Woody Allen quote:
"To love is to suffer. To avoid suffering one must not love. But then one suffers from not loving. Therefore to love is to suffer, not to love is to suffer. To suffer is to suffer. To be happy is to love. To be happy then is to suffer because to love is to suffer. But suffering makes one unhappy. Therefore, to be unhappy one must love, or love to suffer, or suffer from too much happiness. I hope you're getting this down."

Cheers,
Salil

aria said...

"this season we will know
things beyond yes or no"

lovely.
there is something about this season, isn't it ..? love is certainly in the air .
quite different from from your usual stuff as you said..
sorry for being late here.. had been tied up ..
plz write more :)

Iniyaazh - இனியாழ் said...

Lovely lines... I dont now why, but when I read your lines, not one but many meanings dawm on me.

Anju said...

nice one.
cheers!

joie de vivre said...

go go go beyond everything :)

tunafish said...

This makes me visualise you sitting with your sweetheart in a mellow age, mellow evening watching a mellow sunset... I am allowed to sigh? :)

A.J.Johnson said...

Happy Holidays and my wish for you in the coming year is that it will be overflowing with new and wonderful accomplishments.

Best Regards,
A.J.

Rhett said...

Things beyond...o well!

V Rakesh said...

I can imagine how it must be, away from loved ones! I've been away from fellow bloggers and their blogs for a long time now and truly missed it. Hope you are doing good. Wishing you and folks a merry Christmas and a very happy new year!

Karthika said...

Great MIP!Keep going.......

Roopa said...

I am going to break my self-imposed silence here. The poem is simply beautiful MIP. You are still battling with reality and fantasy...aren't we all?

Devika said...

Wish you and family and A very Happy New Year, MIP :)

wishes,
devika

Fantasies of a Lifetime said...

'In each drop of dew
I see you’
as love,like a single child
is wild
cannot be tamed
nor be named'

u write awesome love poems MIP . . Loved it . . .

manoranjini said...

Awwwwwwwww... loved it !!!!

Jyoti said...

cute it was!

Diwakar Sinha said...

very beautifullly written indeed...very involving and meaningful.

AshenGlow said...

love,life and rain
joy, hope and pain
are they real?


God how much i wish i knew the answer to that...

This was a refreshingly frank poetry. Its not only about expressing love. Its about feeling it.. Or is it? The 'untamed child' at times gets really tricky to handle! :)

Am here after a really long time and sorrrie for that. Have been caught up with the so called rains and pains of life...

Anyway you keep up your fantastic writing!

Cheers,
Ashen

The Wandering Gypsy said...

This was beautiful :)

Mampi said...

I sooo identify with this one.

Where are you lost???

rainboy said...

//this season we will know
things beyond yes or no//

they hit something inside.
Very well written...

Love can't be tamed nor the heart.

take care

paritosh said...

A relationship maturing, and with it, the expectations attached also undergoing a metamorphosis... NICE! :D

manoranjini said...

This fan awaits more poetry here ...

Ankur said...

oh.. i loved it.. so poetic and lyrical .. and subtle and powerful at the same time..

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Johnath孟軒 said...

當一個人內心能容納兩樣相互衝突的東西,這個人便開始變得有價值了。..................................................

志文 said...

Gods mill grinds slow but sure. ....................................................

子名子名 said...

A crowd is not company. ....................................................

陳逸群 said...

成熟,就是有能力適應生活中的模糊。..................................................

pinky said...

向小善致敬,它使人生旅程較為平順。........................................

啟達 said...

你不能左右天氣,但你可以改變心情..................................................

靖福 said...

i consder your artical is so nice!.................................................................

孫陽泉 said...

在莫非定律中有項笨蛋定律:「一個組織中的笨蛋,恆大於等於三分之二。」....................................................................

陳芳 said...

Poverty is stranger to industry.................................................................

于庭 said...

成熟,就是有能力適應生活中的模糊。.................................................................

芸茂芸茂 said...

當一個人內心能容納兩樣相互衝突的東西,這個人便開始變得有價值了。............................................................

懿綺懿綺 said...

每次看完你的文章,總是回味許久,要經常發表喔。..................................................................

Devika said...

MIP, Its been a real long long time...why aren't you writing?

hope all is well with you and family,

wishes,
devika

志穎志穎 said...

在你一無所有的時候 是誰在陪伴你 他便是你最重要的人............................................................

郁雯郁雯 said...

我來湊熱鬧的~~^^ 要平安快樂哦..................................................................

吳婷婷 said...

Never put off till tomorrow what may be done today.............................................................

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潘凱花潘凱花 said...

愛情是盲目的,但婚姻恢復了它的視力。............................................................

宜欣宜欣 said...

被你的人氣吸引過來~~............................................................

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The Idle Brain said...

absolutely loved it! How beautiful!