seeing is everything
even u write haiku's :p
I love this abstract teeny-weeny ones.. and also the tag 'not a poem' .. I feel like using them for my poetrics :D keep writing.
ooops wrong connections!!!
after the barter for bliss a wrong connection! wrong day?;-))
Maybe if you corrected the spellings of neurons, the connections will be rectified. Just an observation.:)The idea is very beautifully put. I can never be this brief and this deep. You always amaze me with your talent. Keep it up.
first timer :)That was a beautiful thought!!!
in your poetry you think creative, thats what attracts people :)
@solitary writerlol..not a haiku.it is called a 'notapoem'@ariasure..i am waiting for your 'notapoem'@nanthank you...@jyothiya..shortcircuit in brain!
@Sathish..lolno dear..all for fun.actually 'bartered for bliss'didn't exchanged much bliss..just because when i replaced 'someone' with little angel it looked more good..i learned a lesson..just watch the creation grow itselfwhnever mind comes inbetween short circuits results..
@mampiall the neurons lie on the other side of my brain..LOLthanks a loti corrected the mistake..
@seekerwelcome to the party..will come to your space soon..Thank you..@lenathanks for your kind words..
Solid metaphor, for me:)Succinct.. and telling!
NICE !!feel like doing the same !shot circuiting LOL
@taraTahnk you@usha jiReleived!happy to know that it made you happy..@PeterThank you peter..
hnnm i thought i left my comment..but then oh well here it is again..well like i was saying.. u seem to be confusing me ..this is what i felt about this not a poem.. its more like.. the truth.. or the answer for the solution is right there.. sitting and we tend to over look the obvious..
k fine then wht do u mean by haikufine its notapoem hehhee
nicely written... :P
Precise and simple. Cute.
i am confused.very.is that metaphorical ??? in which case bravoor did that really happen in which case i shall laugh my evil sadistic laugh*laughs*
Notapoem? Is that not a poem? Hee hee:)
nothing wrong with some darkness... we wouldn't appreciate light without it... but there's wisdom in this
metaphorical genius diz write :)
@aniliked your way of interpretation. 'Notapoems' are potential poems..like seeds..a poem might result..Thank you ani..
@solitary..LOL ya..haikus already have a form..Notapoems are still in the process of evolution..potential poems..stem cells of poems?
@di diThank you..
@g.w.z.n.sBoth ways are correct..because it still not a poem.it is a potential poem..A poem might flower in you when you wake up next day after taking a 'notapoem pill' at bedtime...lolThanks a lot..take care..
@river soulbecause you are a wonderful poet it will grow immediately inside you...thank you..
@polonaA wonderful artist like you ,who know the secret of "light and darkness"can definitely go beyond any pattern created with words..thank you...
@sinner..beyond words...thank you..
@sashu..It is because a genius like you reads it..Thank you..
like the proverbial greenand red wires, neuronstoo have identity:)nice one,asuph
@asuphperfect reading!that's why i call them potential poems..thanks..
Just saw this now...this really clicked :)wishes, devika
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