Maybe if you corrected the spellings of neurons, the connections will be rectified. Just an observation. :) The idea is very beautifully put. I can never be this brief and this deep. You always amaze me with your talent. Keep it up.
@solitary writer lol..not a haiku. it is called a 'notapoem' @aria sure.. i am waiting for your 'notapoem' @nan thank you... @jyothi ya..shortcircuit in brain!
@Sathish.. lol no dear.. all for fun. actually 'bartered for bliss'didn't exchanged much bliss.. just because when i replaced 'someone' with little angel it looked more good.. i learned a lesson.. just watch the creation grow itself whnever mind comes inbetween short circuits results..
well like i was saying.. u seem to be confusing me ..
this is what i felt about this not a poem.. its more like.. the truth.. or the answer for the solution is right there.. sitting and we tend to over look the obvious..
@g.w.z.n.s Both ways are correct..because it still not a poem.it is a potential poem.. A poem might flower in you when you wake up next day after taking a 'notapoem pill' at bedtime... lol Thanks a lot.. take care..
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even u write haiku's :p
I love this abstract teeny-weeny ones.. and also the tag 'not a poem' .. I feel like using them for my poetrics :D keep writing.
awesome ;)
ooops wrong connections!!!
after the barter for bliss a wrong connection! wrong day?
;-))
Maybe if you corrected the spellings of neurons, the connections will be rectified.
Just an observation.
:)
The idea is very beautifully put. I can never be this brief and this deep. You always amaze me with your talent. Keep it up.
first timer :)
That was a beautiful thought!!!
in your poetry you think creative, thats what attracts people :)
@solitary writer
lol..not a haiku.
it is called a 'notapoem'
@aria
sure..
i am waiting for your 'notapoem'
@nan
thank you...
@jyothi
ya..shortcircuit in brain!
@Sathish..
lol
no dear..
all for fun.
actually 'bartered for bliss'didn't exchanged much bliss..
just because when i replaced 'someone' with little angel it looked more good..
i learned a lesson..
just watch the creation grow itself
whnever mind comes inbetween short circuits results..
@mampi
all the neurons lie on the other side of my brain..
LOL
thanks a lot
i corrected the mistake..
@seeker
welcome to the party..
will come to your space soon..
Thank you..
@lena
thanks for your kind words..
GREAT!!
am stunned..
@shruthi..
thank you..
Nice ;)
Solid metaphor, for me:)
Succinct.. and telling!
NICE !!
feel like doing the same !
shot circuiting LOL
@tara
Tahnk you
@usha ji
Releived!
happy to know that it made you happy..
@Peter
Thank you peter..
hnnm i thought i left my comment..
but then oh well here it is again..
well like i was saying.. u seem to be confusing me ..
this is what i felt about this not a poem.. its more like.. the truth.. or the answer for the solution is right there.. sitting and we tend to over look the obvious..
k fine then wht do u mean by haiku
fine its notapoem hehhee
nicely written... :P
Precise and simple. Cute.
i am confused.very.
is that metaphorical ??? in which case bravo
or did that really happen in which case i shall laugh my evil sadistic laugh
*laughs*
Notapoem?
Is that not a poem?
Hee hee:)
nothing wrong with some darkness... we wouldn't appreciate light without it... but there's wisdom in this
metaphorical genius diz write :)
@ani
liked your way of interpretation.
'Notapoems' are potential poems..like seeds..a poem might result..
Thank you ani..
@solitary..
LOL ya..
haikus already have a form..
Notapoems are still in the process of evolution..
potential poems..
stem cells of poems?
@di di
Thank you..
@g.w.z.n.s
Both ways are correct..because it still not a poem.it is a potential poem..
A poem might flower in you when you wake up next day after taking a 'notapoem pill' at bedtime...
lol
Thanks a lot..
take care..
@river soul
because you are a wonderful poet it will grow immediately inside you...
thank you..
@polona
A wonderful artist like you ,who know the secret of "light and darkness"can definitely go beyond any pattern created with words..
thank you...
@sinner..
beyond words...
thank you..
@sashu..
It is because a genius like you reads it..
Thank you..
like the proverbial green
and red wires, neurons
too have identity
:)
nice one,
asuph
@asuph
perfect reading!
that's why i call them potential poems..
thanks..
Just saw this now...
this really clicked :)
wishes,
devika
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