Saturday, August 2, 2008

short circuit!

I connected wrong wires
and created darkness
Always be careful
while connecting neurons!

40 comments:

The Solitary Writer. said...

[;)]

The Solitary Writer. said...

even u write haiku's :p

aria said...

I love this abstract teeny-weeny ones.. and also the tag 'not a poem' .. I feel like using them for my poetrics :D keep writing.

nan said...

awesome ;)

Jyoti said...

ooops wrong connections!!!

deepsat said...

after the barter for bliss a wrong connection! wrong day?

;-))

Mampi said...

Maybe if you corrected the spellings of neurons, the connections will be rectified.
Just an observation.
:)
The idea is very beautifully put. I can never be this brief and this deep. You always amaze me with your talent. Keep it up.

The Seeker said...

first timer :)

That was a beautiful thought!!!

Lena said...

in your poetry you think creative, thats what attracts people :)

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@solitary writer
lol..not a haiku.
it is called a 'notapoem'
@aria
sure..
i am waiting for your 'notapoem'
@nan
thank you...
@jyothi
ya..shortcircuit in brain!

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@Sathish..
lol
no dear..
all for fun.
actually 'bartered for bliss'didn't exchanged much bliss..
just because when i replaced 'someone' with little angel it looked more good..
i learned a lesson..
just watch the creation grow itself
whnever mind comes inbetween short circuits results..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@mampi
all the neurons lie on the other side of my brain..
LOL
thanks a lot
i corrected the mistake..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@seeker
welcome to the party..
will come to your space soon..
Thank you..
@lena
thanks for your kind words..

Shruti said...

GREAT!!
am stunned..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@shruthi..
thank you..

Tara said...

Nice ;)

Usha Pisharody said...

Solid metaphor, for me:)

Succinct.. and telling!

peter said...

NICE !!
feel like doing the same !
shot circuiting LOL

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@tara
Tahnk you
@usha ji
Releived!
happy to know that it made you happy..
@Peter
Thank you peter..

ani said...

hnnm i thought i left my comment..

but then oh well here it is again..

well like i was saying.. u seem to be confusing me ..

this is what i felt about this not a poem.. its more like.. the truth.. or the answer for the solution is right there.. sitting and we tend to over look the obvious..

The Solitary Writer. said...

k fine then wht do u mean by haiku

fine its notapoem hehhee

di.di said...

nicely written... :P

Priya said...

Precise and simple. Cute.

the girl with a zillion namesakes said...

i am confused.very.
is that metaphorical ??? in which case bravo

or did that really happen in which case i shall laugh my evil sadistic laugh

*laughs*

RiverSoul said...
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RiverSoul said...

Notapoem?
Is that not a poem?
Hee hee:)

polona said...

nothing wrong with some darkness... we wouldn't appreciate light without it... but there's wisdom in this

d SINNER!!! said...

:)...

Sashu... said...

metaphorical genius diz write :)

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@ani
liked your way of interpretation.
'Notapoems' are potential poems..like seeds..a poem might result..
Thank you ani..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@solitary..
LOL ya..
haikus already have a form..
Notapoems are still in the process of evolution..
potential poems..
stem cells of poems?

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@di di
Thank you..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@g.w.z.n.s
Both ways are correct..because it still not a poem.it is a potential poem..
A poem might flower in you when you wake up next day after taking a 'notapoem pill' at bedtime...
lol
Thanks a lot..
take care..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@river soul
because you are a wonderful poet it will grow immediately inside you...
thank you..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@polona
A wonderful artist like you ,who know the secret of "light and darkness"can definitely go beyond any pattern created with words..
thank you...

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@sinner..
beyond words...
thank you..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@sashu..
It is because a genius like you reads it..
Thank you..

asuph said...

like the proverbial green
and red wires, neurons
too have identity

:)

nice one,
asuph

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@asuph
perfect reading!
that's why i call them potential poems..
thanks..

Devika said...

Just saw this now...

this really clicked :)

wishes,
devika