seeing is everything
n these memories will make us smile one day :)beautiful poem!
Wonderful! Well done!!!
loved this MIP :)happy to see you in form :)wishes, devika
Phew! At least the fading away part was only part of a post! Thanks for this quencher!
Hey... too good! Besides, now science itself has validated as we grow older, our brain filters teh memories and keeps teh happier ones... so lots of happy stuff to remember as we grow older... :-P
I agree, I always felt that living on mineral water bottles was 'te(a)r'rible.Cheers,Salil
ah! beautiful..i loved it :)
I loved the title, !! oops speaks a lot about the content of the mind and the need for the clarity !!Ahem---??? Am I talking about the water bottle or the mind??
i LOVE poems like this.. because there is only one word for them - brilliant!!
Touche! Lovely words..
aaargh I hate those memories...
Lovely !I always wanna write smething short n nice like this piece, just havent been abe to !!Teach me,woudja ?
Lovely MIP!! As always.. short but so right to the point
Ah! Lovely :)
Memories are funny. Data that remain with priority but never understand whether it's negative or positive.
Happiness and satisfaction in life depends a lot on how much we use these filters...One thing MIP..Don't you think we all conceal those tears sealed in our mind..though I am not sure about the sterility part.Nice post..keep writing.
u always come up with sth really amusing short poems..this one was good..In b/w check out my new poem after 2 months..
Time for a new one, MIP :)wishes, devika
nice lines...touchy !
Short and sweet :)Keep it up!
very beautifully written
Hey MIP! Its time for something new, Time to activate yourself, To prepare something delicious With your magical usage of words, To trickle our brains and Satisfy our tastes....
really nice piece , i am always unsure if i want some memories can be fit into boxes and cast away , they are the only proof you have to have lived that moment!!
MIP, Hope to see you writing again....and writing more frequently, please do, :)wishes, devika
yup...memories have the stamina to surround one from either side....
so much said in such few words...beautiful :)
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