Monday, September 21, 2009

Between Blinks

On this blank screen
between two blinks
opens a rabbit hole.
I searched but missed
and got guillotined
by the cursor blade.

12 comments:

Tall Guy said...

Fascinating!!

Good to see you back

aria said...

perhaps thats what living on cursor-edge means.. getting guillotined for missing and ending up in the rabbit-hole for hitting .. :)

nice to see a post from you - after such a long MIP..
trust you've been well.. tc

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Awesome lines as always! You never fail to amaze me!!

Welcome back MIP and please do update often! I badly miss your posts! I hope alls well @ ur end, particularly your lil baby girl.....hope shes fine too!

Thanks very much for your wishes!

Old Monk said...

Back with a bang!...no comments..still scratching my brain..

amateur writer said...

Feels gud 2 see u back on track ,tried hard on "Between Blinks" bt i failed 2 swallow it...

siddhu said...

sry yaar!!!couldn't comprehend-beyond ma level!!!

Devika Jyothi said...

Oh so nice to see you posting MIP

wasn't it fun, MIP? :)
i think we need to loosen ourselves more to enjoy such states....like a child reading 'Alice in Wonderland' :)

Nice post...and hope all is well with you,

wishes,
devika

Akshaya Kamalnath said...

MIP gets tech savvy!!

Yeah I read it as getting royally screwed for technology which does not allow for something as human as a blink :)

Nice to be back and nice to read you.

Fantasies of a Lifetime said...

very interesting , but i see no wonderland in between my blinks :-( . . I am still waiting for my brain to go "ding ding ding"

Gautam Anand said...

U simply never fail to amaze with this short crisp stuffs...


After a sabbatical of 3 months.. it feels good to be back in this blosphere.. awaiting ur insights into my new poem

aria said...

waiting for a new post!

Kush said...

I see that you are one of those...