Monday, August 4, 2008

Secret truths and lies

When i remember secrets
truths come out instantly
like money from an ATM
too many in one jerk!

*i call this" form" a Viewmaster.
Change the first part..and keep on playing with it!

Whenever we quarelled
lies came out instantly
like money from an ATM
too many in one jerk!

24 comments:

aria said...

ohh nice analogy :) like money from ATM..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@aria
thank you...

Moggie Mom said...

:) :)
So True!!!

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@moggie mom
welcome..
actually while you commented i was still playig with my new form..
the "view master"
thank you..

Mampi said...

"Whenever we quaralled
lies came out instantly"

Those lies hurt
till we said-
I didnt mean it.
But the damage had been done.

it was a nice "form"

Suspended Animation said...

Well.. came here through Ani...

Read a lot of your stuff... loved the 'nebulae of bird shit' and the 'babies and mirrors'...

You write really well..

Enjoy and take care.

P.S.: Can I blogroll you..?

Swayam said...

dont know whenever i've seen tempers flying high its not the lies but the truths comin gout... for you no longer think and talk...

ani said...

niceee...

:)

deepsat said...

nice comparison!! guess we hold truth till the right PIN is entered!! ;-))

Take care!

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@mampi
that was good...
and true..
thank you..
@suspended animation
with pleasure..
ani is a wonderful blogger..
take care..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@svayam
It can be true either ways..
There is infinite liberty..the first two lines are not permenant..the structure is reduced to a very essential platform..
like the old"View master"
thank you..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@ani..
thank you..
@Satish..
yes..SECRETS of life..

Vinay said...

good one MIP...

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@vinay
Thank you..

Moggie Mom said...

Aha MIP, so I caught you at a WIP moment!!
LOLs...I loved view masters as a kid and I think this is terrific idea!!!

Cheers

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@moggi mom
LOL
yes...
me too had a View master..
Thanks for coming back!
MIP

Shruti said...

Wow...
so true!! Haven't thought this ever...

polona said...

well, you hit the nail on the head with this.

RiverSoul said...

Your analogy is impeccable.
But is'nt it lies that are harboured in minds that protect secrets?
Where would truth come from?
Nice words though
:)

Gauri Gharpure said...

wonderful play of thoughts

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@river soul
do i know all the secrets about me?
do i know the secret number that will open all the hidden truths?
like sketches they lie undrrneath
may be we all share the same secrets that will reveal our common truths..

The Listener said...

Nice one
Read it 5 times consecutively..liked it so much

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@listener
thanks a lot!
the compliment so far..
MIP

Shamanth said...

hahah....good one!!


how abt this :

when the school bell rang,
kids came out running,
....
....

:)