When i remember secrets
truths come out instantly
like money from an ATM
too many in one jerk!
*i call this" form" a Viewmaster.
Change the first part..and keep on playing with it!
Whenever we quarelled
lies came out instantly
like money from an ATM
too many in one jerk!
24 comments:
ohh nice analogy :) like money from ATM..
@aria
thank you...
:) :)
So True!!!
@moggie mom
welcome..
actually while you commented i was still playig with my new form..
the "view master"
thank you..
"Whenever we quaralled
lies came out instantly"
Those lies hurt
till we said-
I didnt mean it.
But the damage had been done.
it was a nice "form"
Well.. came here through Ani...
Read a lot of your stuff... loved the 'nebulae of bird shit' and the 'babies and mirrors'...
You write really well..
Enjoy and take care.
P.S.: Can I blogroll you..?
dont know whenever i've seen tempers flying high its not the lies but the truths comin gout... for you no longer think and talk...
niceee...
:)
nice comparison!! guess we hold truth till the right PIN is entered!! ;-))
Take care!
@mampi
that was good...
and true..
thank you..
@suspended animation
with pleasure..
ani is a wonderful blogger..
take care..
@svayam
It can be true either ways..
There is infinite liberty..the first two lines are not permenant..the structure is reduced to a very essential platform..
like the old"View master"
thank you..
@ani..
thank you..
@Satish..
yes..SECRETS of life..
good one MIP...
@vinay
Thank you..
Aha MIP, so I caught you at a WIP moment!!
LOLs...I loved view masters as a kid and I think this is terrific idea!!!
Cheers
@moggi mom
LOL
yes...
me too had a View master..
Thanks for coming back!
MIP
Wow...
so true!! Haven't thought this ever...
well, you hit the nail on the head with this.
Your analogy is impeccable.
But is'nt it lies that are harboured in minds that protect secrets?
Where would truth come from?
Nice words though
:)
wonderful play of thoughts
@river soul
do i know all the secrets about me?
do i know the secret number that will open all the hidden truths?
like sketches they lie undrrneath
may be we all share the same secrets that will reveal our common truths..
Nice one
Read it 5 times consecutively..liked it so much
@listener
thanks a lot!
the compliment so far..
MIP
hahah....good one!!
how abt this :
when the school bell rang,
kids came out running,
....
....
:)
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