Wednesday, July 30, 2008

WINDOWS

Frames,panes,grills and curtains
anything can be made with words.
But till morning light could be heard
and evening sounds are tasted
don't claim to the world
that we have made windows!

29 comments:

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Beautiful expression! :)

Shruti said...

wow..
too good..
i often wonder when will i be able to express so beautifully!!

Sashu... said...

profound :) loved diz well worded crisp and concise one :)

deepsat said...

simple yet so deep!!

wonderfully put!!!

;-))

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@thank you sameera..
for liking the 'notapoem'
@Shruthi
"there is no tomorrow..
today is that gifted day
that is why it is called 'present."
:master to kunfu panda.
did you see that movie?

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@sashu
thank you..
happy to know you liked it..

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@sathish
thank you..

Macadamia The Nut said...

Awesome! Hearing morning light... tasting the sounds of the evening... Sigh!!!!

What's In A Name ? said...

a co-incidence of sorts that windows fascinates us both. :)

I penned this on one of its accessories :P:
http://juliusisdead.blogspot.com/2007/07/curtains-call.html

AshenGlow said...

That's Neat! Just look at that window you just created! ^_^
Wonderful!

Priya said...

Isn't it amazing that sometimes words just flow? This was truly one of them!

Cheers!

aria said...

"But till morning light could be heard
and evening sounds are tasted"

this is beautiful. My windows remain shut but I am tempted to peek through them after reading this verse..

nikkita said...

well its stupefying...or if i write in my usually used terms..it was FATANG...

unclouded..dewy-eyed and pored...

loved it...!!
visit my blog sometime..
nikstake.blogspot.com

luv:nickku

Tara said...

Great work! What a play with 'words'...just too good! Wish even I could write like you... :\

Mampi said...

In Punjabi, we call an impressive thing or person GHAINT. Can I call it that? Please?
This was a great one, as always from your Pen,,,errr, keyboard.

Ayushi said...

of course they made Windows!...I wouldnt be using my Vista without it ;) :p

Thats what art is made for,to make you feel illusions...

Swayam said...

beautiful...

Rajesh said...

Yeah...gr8 yaar...very short but sweeter...superb.. jus like shruti, I just wonder if I'll b able 2 write a similar one

P.S: My blog updated

polona said...

ah, this is great!
everything needs a soul, windows notwithstanding...

ani said...

lovely..

u have this wonderful way of using words..

hehe and the label is too cool.. must say.. :)

Usha Pisharody said...

Lovely word play on the senses... and if one can stretch the senses, as you have so beautifully put across, who needs words...!!!

Great job, again.. and Congrats on the Award!!

[Sorry, been rather under weather, and weighed down with work:) Thanks for the visit too:)

Lena said...

what i like in your poems is that you never say things directly, you make a reader think and see rather than just read. Thats indeed a gift :)

nikkita said...

blogrollin u..

Vinay said...

i agree with lena MIP...

RiverSoul said...

How deep your thoughts go!
Amazing.
:)

Cinderella. said...

This one was awesome !!!!

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@all of my friends...
Words are like fire flies..
always trying the impossible..
living and ....
hey another notapoem coming to me..
i will post it....
take care...
and thank you..

asuph said...

actually, you'll kill me for this. these days when anyone says windows, i think of microsoft windows. (to tell me to stop, you'll have to press the stop button, i warn you).

so for a moment i was wondering why you'd want to make windows in the first place. :)

just kidding. very interesting.

cheers,
asuph

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@asuph
I loved it..LOL
Neurons never know where the impulses come from!

windows open beyond our senses..
microsoft windows too offer something beyond our sessual limits..
Thank you..