A virus won a jackpot .
'a trip to budha's brain'!
But after some days
a crystal coffin returned.
the last words of the virus
were found in its travel diary.
" I died of insomnia.
How can I sleep
when there is always light?
(Wish you all a happy new year!
love you all )
30 comments:
Excellent portrayal! Loved the ending! Happy new year to you too!
Wow,
Well said and beautifully put.
Let there be more deaths by insomnia of every dark force.
MIP does it again..! Nice one..!
good creativity....merry christmas:)
Hmm.. I hope the virus travelled through a time and place in which its gallent death confronting insomnia did held some tangible appeal .. while in the present world merciless killing is more likely the rule.
I am trying to give certain cryptic meanings to your short verse :)
wishing you and your family a very happy new year :))
how do u do it man :). one of your best -- sublime and ridiculous at the same time. that's the stuff of dreams!
Ach Mein Gott! (Oh My God!)
I'm speechless!!!!
Wishing you and folks a very happy and prosperous New Year, one that brings you peace, joy, prosperity and good health!
Warm Regards
Rakesh
There is an irony always when i relate myself with what you write...
I can sleep when there's light...and i sleep more comfortably in light! :)
Darkness is the only thing i'm scared about...the black-blogs are scary for that matter :))
wishes,
devika
Lovely one MIP..
Wish you and your family a very happy new year :)!
Lovely one MIP..
Wish you and your family a very happy new year :)!
hey!!! MIP at his best...
A very happy and a prosperous New year..
haha..hehe..loved it..
happy new year...:D :D
I loved this verse...so clever.
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YA MIP!
God bless!
Keshi.
lovely...
Lo...this is what you call New Year bonus.....What an idea sirjii...(I hope Idea people don't go to the Court for saying so.)
cant stop laughing...but yeah 2009 will bring in haloed light that shall kill the dark forces of 26/11.
Happy new year.
wait a minute...is there also a message about knowledge/ wealth/ wisdom being useful only if acquired through sincerety nd no a jackpot?
Ha. Two thoughts:
1.Suits the virus right, has an 'enlightened death'. Just to think jackpots too can be backfiring and repent-worthy!
2.i so wish my body response to light was at least partially similar to that of the virus, i snore like a filled-bellied pig in glaring lights right before exams!
You are imaginative, and how!
Have a lovely new year and keep imagining and writing.
Nice tale!
Happy New Year :)
hehe :) great!
Very nice.
I will certainly never die of that!
Happy 2009
Do visit here to pick up a something I have for you :)
MIP, do come over when time permits :) There is something waiting for you there :)
wow! beautiful! Happy new year!
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What a wonderful way of greeting new year! I think we all need a virus or a light... atleast one of those ;)
Wow, you have a great poetic heart! Keep it coming! Good job!
you always have such unique ideas. :-)
lol..wish you a very happy new year too.
grt ending :)
Just one word: 'WOW'
supreme....... lovely.......
Too Good... :)
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