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I think your smoked brain will be very yum,this is the morbid me speaking.Long awaited poem.And what was the confusion?
I dunno if i interpreted it right but i guess the point was about taking a risk for something better risk did not work and u are left in a position far worse than you were in wen u started out .. am i right ..?btw brilliant stuff... to convey so much in so little ... thts art ..
excellent word mix! indeed, one step to unfreeze a thought is enough to make it a habit! and the result is nothing to gain!!;-))
"Never play with firenear inflammables."thats so true but then the urge is always the contrary.. to play near the fire and then end up smoked.. out of that I'd see you fashion a legacy of joy in your words and sketches..
I agree with aria...
Wow! Your smoked brain has been tripping eh? Good post and a very good summary indeed of how fire and the inflammable need to be miles apart! Keep the good work going
So meaningfull.So much of data in so few words.... Sorry, but c-programming is getting to me.Anyways, its good. A nice little notapoem. And ps My Blog still exists you know. . .. . . Why no visits? Don't like my works? If not, then plz say so. :)
@mampi...Confusion was about blogging itself..i am planning a post on that..happy you liked the word arrange ment
@descrying the shadows..I liked your interpretation..it can be read in that way too.thank you..
@satish..i liked the way you read it..loved it.
@arialolbut i never smoke nor drink..happy you liked it..
@gypsynice name..liked the change..
@river soulHow can I miss you..check your blogsmile..
Love your play with words.awesome.
dude...!!!! thot u were so creative at drawings but u are too good at writings too...A SMOKED BRAIN can produce such write-ups....u r amazing!!! keep it going :)P.S:Blog updated
inflammable brain ?? some concept that!
so much expressed in hardly any words... man u r damn creative... AWESOME!!!especially loved this line - Never play with fire near inflammables... i don know if i really undrstood it rite but the irony of it all made me laugh like anything
nice thought and very well put down
i like smoked salmon...so I wish u were a salmon right now lol!Keshi.
Its so simple yet so deep.Me like it!
I think soaking was the issue, my friend. If you hadn't soaked it, you wouldn't have burned it ;). But then, smoked brains can be tasty too I presume :DEnjoyed it - a bit of your smoked brain, that is :D.
@starry nightsThank you@RajeshThank you..@whats in a name..It is highly inflammable..
@mini mouse..liked your new name..happy it made you laugh..but never try it..lol
@rakesh..Thank you@keshi..:)Thank you..@@solitaire..thanx
its really good mip.. i really liked it
A teetotaler still dabbling wid spirit in his brain, playin wid a cigar and endin up as a shopkeeper though of an unique shop thats ells smoked brain.Nice very nice mah frnd. I shall come agin for more of ur wonderful stuff....
:).. very well written!
niceee..so is it like u have to risk to know the unknown or be happy the way u are???
u r a wordsmith!! *bowing*
Whoa!!I'll come back again to understand it better...right now, Math is reigning me..
The smoked brainhas me all coaxednever to bring anything near fire after its been soakedur smoked brain is amazing with words :D
very introspective...this again can be related to a lot of things.I do it in this way-To relieve urself,u may create an illusion around yourself,and while it was there to cloud your mind:you gave way to every desire...nd now u have to work with the destruction caused to yourself.never let urself 'go' when in an illusion(under the action of spirits):)I also like the words which u used, they gave an overall nice effect.
@ '...Now I have to liveselling smoked brain...'Ha!.. quite explains my situation nowadays... The most painful exercise being having to explain to yourself why and how everything happened... I guess its better not to introspect after all.. Just read the caution and shut up.Great read buddy... Very.
VERY VERY VERY CLEVER!! lovely write!!
You know after reading all this deep interpretations, it may sound silly but all I can think of right now is I want to ask X to take me out for dinner, menu- yes, you guessed right- smoked chicken kebabs! I just think this poem is quite humourous... speaking of inflammable - Why does flammable and inflammable mean the same thing?
as an afterthought... check out some lines of my favourite poetry...
you have your way with words, the way you mix them up is awesome :)
MIP....I wud lik u 2 read ma latest write-up...w8ing 4 ur comments on that....very eagerly :)
Refreshing read. No worries, if the spirit dint work out, somehing else will. Just wait for the brain to rejuvinate first.
"I soaked it in spiritand lighted a cigar"tendencies i'd want to indulge in once in a while...
Sorry MIP.My intelligence (whatever little I have in 'single' digit IQ score) doesn't help me appreciate this.Isn't is common sense not to play with fire near inflammables? :-)Keep writing buddy.Cheers,Salil
Smoked brain.. the image that conjures up is intriguing and oddly scary..nice one MIP
ouch!>> yeah thats what i can say after reading it... very true.. and very well written :-)
:) Hurrah! Long awaited piece of writing...the poem is like a winding road...enjoyed walking through it ...
a funny way of expressing the tested n proven truth.. am here after a long time and got the same experience which i used to identify ur blog with.. howz u buddy? am sorry dat i din do the tag.. i was damn busy with my shifting n my classes, n wasnt wired for a while..
@solitary..thank you@chaggoholicthank you..@matangiafter long time...:)thank you..@ani...interesting question..
@trinaThank you@shruthibest wishes for exams..@fantasies of a life timeThanks a lot..
@ayushiThat was a nice evaluation..liked the way you read it..wasn't much reflective..still me too connect to it in some or other ways..@ashenglowtrue..Feel is also equally important..:)thank you..
@sashuthank you@debuthank you@tunaCan tuna think of anything else?lolThank you..
@akshaya kamalnathThank you@svayamnever smokenever drink smile
@salillolcommon sense is not so....@anuthank you..it is little scary ..@raajithank you..
@priyaThank you..@manorathhappy you are back mano..
I suppose so many other things in life can be used instead of spirit, cigar, fire and smoked brain to reach the same ending. Brilliant imagination and beautiful mixing of words. I loved it.
@sajiganesh..Major saab!thanks a lot.happy you liked it... MIP
so we have a resident "hannibal" here selling smoked brains? :DOn a serious note, all i can say is moderation is the key to success when it comes to playing with fire near inflammable objects. That sudden thrill of being so near and yet so far is all that we are looking for.... excess of "fire" will ruin everything
Your 'smoked brain' is still illuminating & not a bad item to sell at all :-)Good one, MIP!
i got it..every word f it..spirit n smoked up brain..'Now I have to liveselling smoked brain' - very true'but i never smoke nor drink..' - i cant believe it..ur lyingi have one on d similar lines..Rebirth of a muggle..check it out if u have time..
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