seeing is everything
Really nice piece. Your writings reflect that you observe and feel, and that you're a philosophical person...probably you live in a surreal world or you like surrealism..Interesting way of expressing and writing.Keep writing :)Thanx a lot for commenting on my blog! :D
Good writing.Something like Zen.deeply philosophical.keep on writing.
"carpetted with nebulas of bird shit"loved the line and the theme
you have a unique creativity in you which is very strongly evident in your writings!i was carried away by this piece of your strange yet so effective creativity..Congratulations..and happy writing!:)
Beautiful...On my blogroll...
hey i love each every post of urs.. they are brilliant.. and topped with ur crativity.. and frm a philosopher like u..each and every line of this poem is brilliant.. there is a unique experience i felt whn i read this poem..
@i'm aliveYou really named it.Thanx.
Its this unnerving feeling of you seeing every little thing so well, that it seems unreal...nebulae of bird droppings?? What a piece of imagery! Perfect!
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