On the polar whiteness of a canvas,
like skeletons, some sketches surfaced.
Seasons began to bleed,green and then grey on it.
People called it " the man in painting".
No painting have ever learned
the fine art of seeing itself.
Man In Painting too beleived
what people say was always true.
Till the colour and contour fade
Till the great ice age return
Watch, watch ,watch and watch
what else can this painting do?
34 comments:
the thing which made me go reading the poem was the way it sounded.. the words are selected to jus go with the sound.. i interpreted it in my own way.. and am not posting it in my comment as i respect the readers' interpretation and let my comment b a spoiler.. lookin for more posts frm u..
good writing.keep on writing.visit chamak purnam.
hellos. thank you for dropping by my blog.
uv got a very, very nice blog, and this post was especially good!
keep posting such wonderful stuff...
ciao!
(p.s.can i blogroll u?)
hello,very very interesting way of expressing one self.It is both spiritual and philosophical. it is more than just surreal.congragulations for such a wonderful blog.
best wishes.keep on writing.
Great buddy.... theres a dash of freshness in ur writing.... enjoyed...
Surreal indeed...
That is amazingly superb..i appreciate ur views....keep on writing..looking for more.....
amazing blog...ur industry is science and ur job is writing?how come?thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a kind comment :o) appreciate it...do keep reading and commenting!
Living in a surreal world can make us travel through all possibilities
of dreams....but only a talent like you can give a life to The Man in Painting.Expecting more Writings from you!
a beautiful poem. :)
ishtamaayi. why dont you write in malayalam?
So nice man!
No painting have ever learned
the fine art of seeing itself.
Cheers!
very good words to make one think!
Thanks!
;-))
nice poem.
i quite liked your blog too. your posts are real deep !!!
nice post and liked the poem...very true...!!
will be back....!!!1
tht was a beautiful poetry...
No painting have ever learned
the fine art of seeing itself.
loved these lines a lot!
nice blog too!! great writing.. it looks gud..mayb u can try making it look even better.. jus a suggestion.. cheers
beautifully written :-)
I am blog rolling you :-)
Cheers!
thanks for yr comments on my blog. Enjoyed reading your blog. Surreal, indeed. This was a wonderful insight into the world of inanimate objects (aren't we all inanimate to some degree?)
Looking forward to more reads...
beautifully crafted dude!.. this post so lives up to your blog name of the keyboard sculptor!!
wonderful!
Thanks alot for ur generous comments...just went through ur blog, however am not leaving any comment rite now..would like to give the poems a detailed reading and then say sumthing(it may take sum time as i m busy wid my internship rite now)...neways keep writing and b in touch...regards,
Noor
No painting have ever learned
the fine art of seeing itself.
classic!
thanks 4 visiting my blog...keep comin and keep writing :)
thanks for the comment on my blog
nice poem this one...
superb post!!:)awesome word usage!!
thanks for your kindness to visit my blog and give nice comments.
Wow! That was really good... Does it involve a pun on modernism by any chance... i am sure, my literature teachers would find it quite a read!
wow...surreal is right.......please keep writing...
:)
keep it rollin;)
No painting have ever learned
the fine art of seeing itself.
interestin a theme...beautiful concept n well written too! an experience, into de self...thru de open space f a paintin :)
beauty!
Interesting read... Thanks for stopping by my blog!
i like it here. your blog is well written and intriguing and very enjoyable.
thanks for stopping by my blog :)
You write really well. You give the reader the freedom to paint their imagination in their own way. You write in an amazingly refreshing manner...
Keep writing :)
d man in painting...n the painting man..hey!!!
coincidence:)
to tel u d truth, i m nt a good appreciator of poems..
to say least..as far as i cn interpret the poem, it seemed beautiful 2 me!!
Amazing read..!!
Hey
Thankyou for checking out my piece. You have a wonderful collection
I read a few and has good content.
Looking forward to read more of your writing.
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