Wednesday, April 23, 2008

HOW WE SURVIVED


We lived together
yet separate,
like yolk and white.

10 comments:

butterflieffect said...

LIked it !

Jishad said...

aaraanu manassil?

tunafish said...

I loved this ...simple yet so very effective... I think u finally solved the age old riddle... chicken or teh egg... I will say from now on...yolk!

Usha Pisharody said...

Amazing, simply amazing, in its utter simplicity, the image, the metaphor, the wealth of the unsaid!

A tastefully done blog, one that is as interesting to read as it is to visually feast..:)

Sashu... said...

deep metaphor...profound!! beautiful :)

WandereR said...

Deep! very deep. It describes a lot of relationships that people do share in this world. You just summed it up in one line.

Jyoti said...

well, that depends on point of view, i feel they are not seperate..they are different, like maggi tomato chilli sauce ;)

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@jyothi
i liked that deconstruction....
Different they are..but can they survive alone?

manisha said...

sum how i nvr understnd haikus ( if dis ws one :( )

MAN IN PAINTING said...

@manisha..
it wasn't a haiku..
I think haiku's follow some rules..
it is just a metaphor.
came unconsciously...
But your comment was sincere...
thanx